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"cletus44 aka Clayton Seams" (cletus44) 12/02/2016 at 14:44 • Filed to: None

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This is what my articles look like before someone edits the salt out of them. !!!error: Indecipherable SUB-paragraph formatting!!! ’s what it looks like by the time you see it.

TheHondaBro > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 14:54

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You seem cranky.

DynamicWeight > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 14:55

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“Strike a cord ” should be “strike a chord ”. A cord is a pile of wood. A chord is a musical term for multiple notes played at the same time.

“but it has surely what every Camry fan has been wanting for years” should be “but it surely has what every Camry fan has been wanting for years” I’d also contract fan and has to “fan’s” to get rid of the duplicate word but that’s just me.

Also, that Camry corner looks terrible. Over-design of mundane cars is getting crazy. I’m looking at you new civic!

bob and john > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 14:57

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if it make you feel any better, at least your stuff gets edited, posted, and you make money off of it!

mine doesnt. I just post. for better or for worse.

RamblinRover Luxury-Yacht > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 14:57

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It’s probably a good idea to first draft this way, as it allows you to get the structure of the piece right while keeping the tone you want in mind fresh and within reach. Edit in the more moderate remarks, and lingering saltiness will probably show through in the structure, like Lemon Zest.

cletus44 aka Clayton Seams > DynamicWeight 12/02/2016 at 15:02

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I’m also a grammatical nightmare

cletus44 aka Clayton Seams > TheHondaBro 12/02/2016 at 15:02

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That’s my secret, captain. I’m always cranky.

SidewaysOnDirt still misses Bowie > DynamicWeight 12/02/2016 at 15:22

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No, he was saying he was going to strike a Cord automobile like with a baseball bat or something. Fucking monster.

Daily Drives a Dragon - One Last Lap > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 15:22

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So far, I think I like the look of the new Camry.

DynamicWeight > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 16:31

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I blame your editor.

TheHondaBro > cletus44 aka Clayton Seams 12/02/2016 at 19:11

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Blatantly obvious.